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Postby Bluesflameangel » Fri Feb 17, 2006 10:11 pm

Followed

I followed you one night
Just to see where you’d go.
And the place you went
Surprised me so.
In a churchyard you went
And knelt down to pray.
And I wondered what had
Brought you there that day.
I followed you to a grave
But stayed far away.
Tears fell, as I watched you
Fall on your knees to stay.
I wondered for long
Whose Love did you keep
As you knelt by the grave
That night to weep.
I needed to know
So I took a look to see
And sadness took over when
I saw it was me.
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Postby arielyn » Sat Feb 18, 2006 11:20 am

thats really fuckin good angel.

/applaud
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Postby Mechell » Mon Feb 20, 2006 7:57 pm

:) I really like chicka :)
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Postby bill » Tue Feb 21, 2006 12:11 pm

Nicely done )
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