Her and me.

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Her and me.

Postby truran » Sun Jul 30, 2006 3:31 am

There's only enough light to cast silver shadows
Moonlight creates puppets above the bed
I stare past her body out the window
Tender thoughts travel through my head
Twisting tendrals of time into memory
Almost asleep I feel her breath against my neck
I know she told me that I'd fall asleep before her
My eyes closed, I feel her watching me
I wonder what she thinks
I stay awake and try to hear her
She's too kind to speak aloud of feelings and plans
Revealing strength of heart and requiring a reply
It seems, at this moment, she is on the edge of words
Knowing what she feels
And me holding her tightly
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Postby truran » Sun Jul 30, 2006 3:38 am

ok this was my first attempt at trying to take a dream and turning it into a poem lol it prolly sounds pretty messed up but i was trying to go for lustless intimacy
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Postby Nadiah » Sun Jul 30, 2006 5:43 pm

beautiful
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Postby Harmfulbag » Sun Jul 30, 2006 5:51 pm

that is really sweet nicely writen hun....
Take care of you and yours......

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Postby truran » Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:25 pm

i was really apprehensive about posting my work on here but i wanted you guys to know what kind of person i was through my writing
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Postby Serano » Sun Jul 30, 2006 10:45 pm

know I was gonna say something man like but meh. hah hah.
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Postby bill » Wed Aug 02, 2006 12:22 pm

I do love some good poetry. Best thing about it, like abstract art, it isn't always what you mean that makes a poem but more often it is what the reader walks away with.

I liked it Truran.
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Postby Serano » Wed Aug 02, 2006 2:26 pm

I wrote a poem once about chicks or lack thereof. but then I got old and crusty!

a good friend of the family just died she was a renouned California poetry Scene poet named Pegasus Buchanan. Apparently well known in poetry circles. Well she left all her money to her cleaning lady. hah - her cleaning lady is my mom's best/last friend from High school Cherie - and has been like a daughter to Peg for decades - and Pegasus had no surviving children. (both sons and her hubby died one each in the three years preceeding her death).

So now Cherie who has been renting my mom's accross the street property for over a decade for like $700 at least under the fair rental value but covering the mortgage - and is still a cleaning lady - is worth nearly 2 million. Funny world.

I read some of Peg's Poetry - and it uhh -didn't really stir me much - but then I am a barb. Regardless her favorite poem is the only one of hers I memorized. It follows:


Earthquake

She won a contest with that poem - go Pegasus!!!
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